welcome.
go ahead and read my badly thought out story’s so you can help me get better.
my sincere thanks.
from a bad writer.
My body had wounds everywhere and I could feel it slowly becoming cold. The constant throbbing pain made my head go blank. I swung my great sword again and another body fell to the ground. My body moved on instincts alone as I fought for what felt like days. I wonder when I stopped caring … More familiar prologue
(RANDOM PERSON’S POV) “And remember to be extremely careful with the seniors, I heard there is someone called Sharamon among the second years who is tyrannical beyond compare” As I was talking to my daughter besides me I saw a small white haired girl walk through the crowd of people towards one of the staff members. Is … More Familiar CH.4
(I will switch between writing form pretty often so to make it easier I will name the writing form at the beginning of the paragraph. I will also use a better font from now on.) 3rd person You can do it! Was what I was thinking as I stood in front of the large building … More familiar CH.3
